Ok,
@Zachary heres my attempt at a better story, but I will say I used the interns models and renovation as inspiration.
First off: the 5 Roman god concept is gone. No longer is that there. This is about a battle between Jupiter and Pluto. I find it kinda strange Apollo is represented twice basically.
The ride gets the new tagline that BGW is fond of:
Pantheon: Plutos Invasion
The story goes:
To celebrate the travels of Marco Polo (what Fiesta Italia is based on) Jupiter has decided to invite distinguished members of the Roman Empire on a one time tour of the gods gardens.
Vulcan has built a special mechanical sleigh that can carry and protect mortals from the travel to go to the Pantheon to tour their gardens.
As you board your sleigh Zues takes you on a fun frolicking tour of the gardens (launch 1 through the switch track). But something sinister is lurking.
As you hit the switch track Pluto arises, hungry for all the souls he lost when Marco Polos travels failed to be attacked. Jupiter tries to push you away (forward launch, tunnel over launch has white lighting effects), but Pluto pulls you back (backwards launch with now blue lighting effects), then Jupiter saves you from Pluto (hangtime on spike), and pulls you forward with a mighty heave (start of last launch). As soon as you thing you escape, a strike of red crosses the sky (lighting change to red) and Pluto redirects your sleigh towards the underworld.
As you start flying through your trip Jupiter saves you multiple times (top hat decent, outer banked turn, the roll) from plunging into the depths of Plutos realm. With one final pull through a lightning portal (head chopper element) Jupiter pulled you to safety. Before you are able to return to the land of the mortals, Jupiter puts you through one last portal (stall) to wipe your memory of the warring gods and make you forget all about the battle of the gods.
What I like is that it could use all the theme elements put forth by those interns, but it pares down the story.
The only additional work I would include is sprucing up the queue and adding elements that seem a bit sinister like open portal with steam and rumbles. Along the track putting speakers with music, sound effects and even short blurbs of sayings.